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As a tutor in a college Writing Center, I have often noted that it is my students who teach me, rather than the other way around. Prior to joining the center, I had worked as an educator in various classroom settings and grade levels.  When asked to write a reflective piece on my first month as a tutor, I commented that I had spent the previous 10 years learning about teaching, but the last 30 days learning about learning.

Margaret Syverson, in her book The Wealth of Reality: An Ecology of Composition, offers one explanation for this reversal of the teacher-student dynamic. Syverson talks about writing as part of an ecological system. She explains that the processes involved in composing operate much like a biological ecosystem or the economic system in which the stock market operates.  In these systems, “people, atoms, neurons, or molecules, for instance–act and interact in parallel with each other, simultaneously reacting to and co-constructing their own environment” (3).  In writing, she notes, the same thing occurs.  According to Syverson, “Writing, like other cognitive processes, occurs in ecological systems involving not only social but also environmental structures that both powerfully constrain and also enable what writes are able to think, feel, and write” (9).

Such is the case with the Writing Center. One way this happens is through what Syverson calls distribution. In complex systems, distribution refers to the way a cognitive process of writing is shared by both the people and the physical objects in the environment. In the Writing Center, the composing process is distributed among many such objects. The main tutoring room is composed of six square tables, each with four chairs. The table becomes an integral part of the composing process, a tutor and student sit adjacent at one. Both are equal partners. The paper sits between them, so as to retain ownership where it belongs. Last night’s tutoring session, a young student read aloud from her “cause-effect” paper about the effects of her father’s death last year. She started to cry. The paper lay between us as she read, and the composing process was distributed among the two of us, the paper, and the table, which seemed to absorb the student’s grief. It lay there as she finished her reading, as if to capture her sorrow in a concrete place where we could view it. As we gazed at the second paragraph of the paper, I commented, “Your pain is raw here.” She nodded in agreement. She took a pen and scratched out her introductory paragraph, a convention she realized was unnecessary and took away from her actual meaning.

Syverson speaks also of emergence, a term for “self-organization, order, and structure that emerge from simple components that might be expected to exhibit either random, chaotic behavior or stable, predictable behavior”  (11). Ironically, the student who came in last night had no set appointment. She had never been to the Writing Center. We close at 8 p.m., she arrived at 7 p.m. announcing that she had to first write the draft before she could sit down with a tutor. She said she had missed her last two classes and was required to get feedback from the Writing Center because she had missed the peer review of her paper during class. I suggested she sign in on the drop-in list and that if she finished by 7:30, she might be able to achieve her goals in one evening. In a random occurrence of events, she ended up sitting down with me. As we discussed the paper, the typical chaos inherent in a revising session took place. “I know I was obsessed with the death,” she said. Again, we looked at the paper, which we now had neatly arranged in three separate sheets on the tutoring table. “Yes,” I agreed.  There was a pause.  “Is that bad?” I questioned. The page of narrative in which she discussed not the effects of her father’s death, but her obsession with its trauma, seemed to stare at us. We stared back, without a plan.  Suddenly, from out of nothing, came organization. Between the lines that kept repeating how she couldn’t believe this had happened to her were glimpses of the legacy her father had left her in the philosophy she had come to use in healing from it. In such a shared cognitive activity, authorship is blurred.

Syverson’s ecological look at composing involves embodiment. Certainly, the student and I were contained by the physical spaces of our own bodies, but also by the Writing Center room itself, which contained our thought process in a certain space, as our half-hour session contained it in a certain place in time. In the middle of the table, slips of paper sat in a plastic container, reading to record our half-hour exchange.

Lastly, Syverson refers to the principle of enaction, “the principle that knowledge is the result of an ongoing interpretation that emerges through activities and experiences situated in specific environments” (13). She calls texts “paths laid down in walking. and and says that writing is something “about or directed toward something that is missing” (16). As the student in the Writing Center and I responded to and interacted with the text, our experiences talking and the activity of the tutoring session itself resulted in our “bringing forth” a new meaning to the experience she had written about. As we finished the session, it became clear to the writer that her father’s death had resulted in many changes to her family’s way of life, the most important of which was the way it had shaped her perception of death and her perspectives on life.

Syverson’s look at writing as part of an ecosystem helps describe the multiple interactions that come into play in a Writing Center environment much more than cognitive models that look at writing as taking place in isolation within one individual’s head. As Syverson points out, “Composing, like many other human cognitive processes, is irreducibly social and inextricably embedded in specific environments that are not merely supportive of but integral to the processes of thinking, writing, and reading” (25-26).

 Think you’ve seen it all?  View this.

 

Thanks for the link.  I had already done this, however.  Once I download the program (I’ve done and undone this about 10 times now), when I go to open anything in Adobe and the licensing agreement comes up, the page sort of freezes when I click “Accept.” It does not allow me to accept it. The page does not respond at all.

1.  How do I save a Blog post as a Word document? I tried to figure it out, but couldn’t.

2.  I cannot download Adobe to view samples in pdf.  My computer downloads, but will not accept the licensing agreement.  I have been plagued with this problem for several months. 

Okay, I’m two minutes into the reading of The Jew’s Daughter, an example of hypertext fiction for my Writing for Electronic Communities class, and I’m already mad.  So far, the piece reminds me of the reason I was not an English major. Already evident are four things:  1.  This writer cannot get to the point.  2.  This writer is in love with the sound of his own words. 3.  This writer is self-indulgent.  4.  This writer is confusing the reader on purpose in order to maintain a certain kind of power or dominance over the reader.

Let me explain. 

“…her affirming flesh beached in bed as the windows begin to turn blue. And what can now be said about this sleeping remainder?  Her face is a pale round moon. Her hair like southwestern wheat. Her hands pale and delicate, her palms tough and dry.” Pleeease.  You can find this stuff on the rack at the airport newsstands.  Maybe that’s why the text changes so fast.

Audience awareness?  It appears this author writing solely for an audience of one–himself.  I was lost on the title page for five minutes (what happened to the principle of never loosing the back button?)  If that is what the author intended, shame on him. It sort of reminds me of the doctor who keeps you waiting in his office for hours. The message?  Your time is not important to me.

George P. Landow writes in Hypertext 3.0 that disorienting fiction (ala The Sound and the Fury) is pleasurable to readers because it is like a game that surprises; it offers the reader a sense of satisfaction when he or she figures it all out. I get that. I felt that way with Faulkner. I am not feeling this with the writing of Morrissey, with whom I have little patience as he rambles incessantly around whatever it is he appears to be writing about.

If Morrissey’s sole purpose is in confusing the reader, the question becomes, why?  Is it to establish a kind of intellectual dominance (if you can’t figure this out, than I must be smarter than you), to delight in the thought of confusing the masses, to assert a kind of power (sort of like the tale The Spider and the Fly)?

I’m opting out of this game.

For students in Writing for Electronic Communities, the March 13 discussion questions regarding the Landow text are as follows:

1. Landow writes about the problem of disorientation in reading hypertext. He also says this is not necessarily a bad thing. Have you ever experienced “pleasurable” disorientation when reading a piece of literature, viewing a film, or looking at a piece of art?

 

2.  Read the post in this blog entited A Nation of ADD.  Do any of the links make you “confused and resentful” (154)? How does this relate to what Landow says makes for good hypertext?

3.  How can writers of hypertext help with the less pleasant forms of disorientation (see pages 154-173)?  Which would help you the most? Why?

4.  How is hypertext narrative different than regular narrative?  If you were to write the story of the Wizard of Oz in hypertext, how would you go about doing it?

5.  Who do copyright laws need to protect in this electronic age:  authors or readers?

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Remember when moms used to plop kids on the kitchen floor with a bunch of pots and pans just for fun?  When a pile of wet sand provided a toddler with sculpting material? When kids would go outside and play with other children? No more. Today’s kids are more likely to be plopped in front of a computer monitor playing with virtual kitchenware, cyber sand, and fake friends.

The Asbury Park Press recently reported on another version of structured creativity soon to be stifling our country’s little ones. It’s called Disney Fairies Pixie Hollow, an on-line virtual world that will let kids  pretend to be fairies and “dress up, fly around, befriend other fairies and help paint lady bugs, teach baby birds to fly or go on other nature-related quests.”  A modified version, the website www.disneyfairies.com already exists. 

To complement the new, expanded website, kids will be able to buy bracelets and charms called Clickables. When kids “click” their bracelet to a friend’s, their on-line fairy avatars will become buddies in the fake computer world. Disney Online’s Senior VP Steve Parkis explains it like this:  “No longer will you be passively watching these famous fairies, who you’ve always had this distant, passive relationship with.  You’ll be interacting with them.”

The trouble is, kids will remain be passive. Instead of dressing up as fairies and playing with real children, kids will be stuck in their play clothes, socially isolated.  “We’re all working really hard to pay for these electronic things that we think we need,” says child psychologist Stephanie Pratola. “But what I know about kids is that it’s their relationships that help them grow and develop. And it’s not a virtual relationship. It’s a real relationship.”

As far as creativity, the effect will be the opposite of what its designers claim. Instead of encouraging creativity, the virtual world will stifle it. Kids’ imaginations will be limited to whatever the Disney imagineer has concocted for them. ”It’s like everybody using their imagination in a similar way,” Pratola says. “How imaginative is that?”

With Sympathy

My thoughts and prayers goes out to the parents of this beautiful boy. May they find peace.

A Nation of ADD

Anyone who has ever taught an student with Attention Deficit Disorder can tell you what it looks like. The forgotten homework, the disaster inside the desk, the unfinished assignment inside the backpack. They’re all telltale signs. The adult with ADD is equally identifiable. His is the house half painted, the one with the Christmas lights still up and that bathroom remodeling job half finished.

Soon will all have ADD.  I am training my mind right now. I’m reading text on the computer with multiple links. Everytime my mind wants to wander somewhere, I let it. I just click on a link and go.  Where was I?  I forget. Oh well, I guess I’ll just follow a link. This is the new world. Technology will enable us let our minds go off into all sorts of directions, depending on a sort of free association. George P. Landow writes about this in his book Hypertext 3.0. How nifty. He describes how technology is making us all readers and authors because hypertext allows us to let our brains just wander off wherever they want.

My sister and I used to play this game when we were little. Before we fell asleep each night we’d play a word game we made up called free association. I’d say “book,” and she’d say something like “Nancy Drew.” I’d come back with “detective” and she’d say “badge.”  On and on we’d go until one of us couldn’t come up with a link. That made us the loser.

I guess this is how the new technological world will be. Can’t link?  You lose. But here’s the thing. Playing free association doesn’t let you think (or is that link?) about anything for very long. If you linger and concentrate, you’re not following the links. It’s sort of like skipping rocks along a river. You toss them so they never really drop deep into the water, they just skim the surface, moving quickly from spot to spot. You’ll cover a lot of lake, just not very deeply.

I use this metaphor often with my writing students. I tell the ones with underdeveloped ideas they are writing like they are skipping rocks along a river. They jump from one idea to the next. They never throw their rock into the river and make it sink to the bottom. They don’t stay in one idea place long enough to explore it in all its implications.

Some people think this is a good thing. (If you followed this last link, I hope you remembered to come back.) I think it’s rewiring our brains to have ADD.

Halfway through my assignment reading half a textbook called Hyertext 3.0  (for a graduate class called Writing for Electronic Communities), I know I am supposed to feel excited about the notion that text is becoming three dimensional, that readers are now authors, that technology is now empowering me to read ten documents at once, exploring multiple dimensions of a subject with the click of a mouse. Instead I feel disengaged, dehumanized, and frankly, overwhelmed.

 Am I alone?

As I quickly (oh so quickly) click my way through my classmates blog postings (another weekly assignment), foraging for something that I can connect with to comment on in my own weekly post, I feel myself drowning in a sea of information. Instead of finding something to connect with, I find nothing. Too much information. The words, video, images cancel each other out. They are an orchestra warming up. The instruments that make beautiful sounds alone, make discordant noise when played together.

 As I write this blog, people (real ones) talk, move, connect…all without me. I am imprisoned by information, held hostage by blogs, posts, texts, readings, links. Why is it that what is supposed to connect me with the thoughts of others makes me feel disconnected?

I have decided that I don’t want to read five documents at once. I want to read just one, really well. I’ll remember it when I read my next one, thank you, and I’ll make the connections needed to assimilate information because I will have processed it well enough to truly understand it.

I am drowning in information. Can anyone save me?

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